NaNoWriMo Update 10 – Alphas and Catchups

Since the last two posts didn’t go through right, figured condensing them into one rather than reposting late.

Done introducing new characters for now. Little ancillary ones, of course, but no new mains for another 12 chapters or so. Got a good read from my alpha reader with excellent feedback. Changes a few things in context, reinforces a few other things, helps with formatting, and above all great idea on keeping people straight for the readers.

Word count updated. At present rate, should finish the goal of 50k words on Christmas Eve. Not acceptable. Need to find another gear now that I’m finally shaking this cold.

Writing this one with an eye towards Kindle/iBook release only. Why waste time on an agent for a “throwaway” book, right?  Right? 

NaNoWriMo Update #7 – Pecking

Home with the kids while the wife is off bringing home the real bacon. Side note: would love to bring home enough writing bacon that we could trade places 🙂

Picking at the keyboard between cleaning tasks and breaking up fights is interesting. It gives me a chance to think through what these characters will do and why in a different way. The disjointed nature of walking away after a paragraph really gives me a chance to express the disjointed nature of a character’s thoughts.

Short word count so far this morning for obvious reasons. Looking to crank out some this afternoon and evening. 2-3k would put me close to weekly goal. Maybe some additions tomorrow will get me on track.

NaNoWriMo Update #6 – Introductions

Still sick but slightly better off than yesterday. Bah, who cares, on to the writing!

Wondering if I’m introducing too many characters at once but plowing through the fear. The brevity of the chapters is offset (I hope) by the method of time actually flowing as opposed to giving a snapshot of all new characters at the same moment in time. Hopefully this will act as a kind of secondary character. Time, I mean. By having time move along at a steady pace while introducing new characters, I hope to make things flow in a steadier, more understandable pace.  Will have to rely on my alpha reader for some feedback there. Good luck, Kevin.

Am reaching the end of the book’s first day, which is actually set two days before something big happens.   Everyone knows it, is no surprise, but it’s still tense. In this manner, I hope to bring the reader in without blowing all the action upfront. Again, go go gadget alpha reader! 

Word count increased to just under 6k. Need to get it up to 10 k to get on track for 50k end. A 50k word book – that’ll officially be my shortest one ever.

NaNoWriMo Update #5 – Speed Bump

Sick. Ugh. Up at 2 last night/ this morning when my brain switched on. Wife and I passed like zombie ships in the night as she tended to sick kids (while sick) and I retreated to the office to let her sleep. Traded places at 5 when I woke up on the office floor and stumbled to bed; she went to my office futon because I was snoring. Sorry babe.

Writing while sick is an exercise all to itself. I get inside my head and start to wonder if I’m over the top on some things or ignoring others. It’s like writing in bullet-time (think The Matrix) only reversed; instead of time slowing and letting me dodge bullets, it shoots past me while I peck at two or three keys. I don’t recommend it as an experience worth repeating or even doing.

Word count increased as the Sudafed kicked in. Hopefully it fits the rhythm of everything before it. Will learn tomorrow. Tonight is for some serious rest and relaxation. Ugh.

NaNoWriMo Update #4 – Eureka!

Going into this challenge, I was relatively blind. I knew the general backstory to my fictional land and a few of the cities that would be important to the story, but that’s about it. What I didn’t know was how to differentiate the book, how to make it unique in the fantasy realm.  Would there be magic?  Gods?  Wizards?  Dragons?  I wasn’t sure, so instead of letting myself get bogged down in the fear, I just let it ride. Go get it, brain! 

It did. I think I have a workable framework for moving things forward both in the sprint and the marathon stages. Super excited to see if it works and if I can pull it off. Should be fun.

Oh, and word count increased yet again.

NaNoWriMo Update #3 – the Digital Divide

NaNoWriMo day three is in the bag, and the word count has risen slightly. My one day of outside-the-house work was today, so the laptop was left behind. To compensate, I used pen and paper to scribble out some of the characters I’ll be introducing soon. Making the characters gave me better insight into their cities, which in turn gave me more insight on interactions between and among the cities.  Feels good to scribble things out, to scratch out the bad and write in the good and see everything remain on the page.  That’s one thing word processing has against it – once you delete, it’s gone (normally, of course; I’m not talking about seeing draft and crossing out and blah blah blah).

Tonight was writing night, the night I get out of the house, hit up a Starbucks, and caffeinate myself into creativity. Hey, it works.  As long as I can ignore the people around me, I’m good, and that’s why God made headphones, right? One quick aside – why in the world does a tutor take up residence at the nice table in the back every freaking time?  Same guy,  same bunch of high schoolers, and I’m still not sure exactly what he tutors. He’s always eating or stepping away to get a drink or hit the restroom or just chatting and laughing with the high schoolers. If I were paying for these sessions. I’d better be getting more out of it than watching him eat his soup from a thermos!

NaNoWriMo Update #2

Just a bit over a thousand words today as of 6: 30. I blame my kids…awesome little things that they are.

The hardest part about this challenge is creating things on the fly with less planning than I normally like. To make things smoother, I’ve decided to suck it up and use the modern convention of seriously short chapters with mildly detailed headings. Not what I’m normally comfortable with, but isn’t that the point of a challenge? 

NaNoWriMo Announcement and Update #1

Among the elite of the idiotic, my stature is massive.

The National Novel Writing Month of November is upon us, and I have foolishly decided to attempt..nay…succeed in the naive venture of completing an entire novel in the course of a single month.  Obviously I didn’t have enough to do, what with being a husband to my wonderful and supportive wife, stay-at-home-father to three children, finding an agent for my other ready book, and dialogue writing for Black Chicken Studios.  Ah well, I’m sure I’ll be fine.

For my project, I selected the skeleton of an ancient outline – skeleton because it was more timeline than outline and ancient because it was BC (before children).  The Twenty Three Cities, by Colin Donahue. Just grabs you and makes you go, “Huh?”

Update #1. Rocked it yesterday. Totaled 247 words. Goal of 50k lookout!  In all fairness, it was Sunday, day of rest…and The Walking Dead. Don’t judge me, just buy my stuff and blindly applaud!

Submitted!

Officially submitted “The Devil and Casari: Ad Hominem” to the Steve Laube agency today.  Looking forward to hearing back that they loved it…cause if they didn’t, I won’t hear back from them at all.  🙂

First Edit Complete

Finished the first editing pass on TDaC 1 last night – many thanks to those who sent in their edits and thoughts.  Still have a few changes to make in the next six days, but am still on target for my official completion of the end of August. Assuming nothing major pops up between now and then, I can put this one “in the books” and move on to the next project.

That brings me to my next quandary: do I go straight to kindle, or do I at least give an agency a swing at it?  There are agencies that specialize in Christian themed books, and I know these sell pretty well, but is it worth the time and anxiety to wait?  My current thinking is to blanket the agencies between now and November and see what I can get; if nothing pops, go kindle in December. Gonna have to pray on that one and see what comes out.

As far as my next project goes, Kevin and I are still working on book two of our series. Ball is in my court for chapter nine, but TDaC has really eaten my time. Makes me hesitate a bit on whether to start book two of TDaC right away or squeeze in something shorter while the plot finishes percolating. I knew way back what the big deal with TDaC 1 was, but I haven’t had that full AH-ha moment with bk 2 yet. Sigh…the tough life of the creative minded 🙂